To bring green campus to its full play, effective measures should be taken. First, based on its education function, campus should bring the theory of sustainable development into classrooms, set environmental management rules and conduct environmental education activities. Second, it is essential that law and regulations be worked out and enforced by the government and school authorities. Only by the co-efforts of the whole society could green campus work smoothly and bring benefit to peoples well-beings.

　　修改润色

　　1.检查

　　检查是否包含考卷提纲列出的所有信息；各段落衔接是否连贯，使用In the first place, Furthermore, On the one hand， For instance， On the other hand等词可以达到这种效果；语法上单词拼写上是否有误，如较长单词indispensable，environmentally friendly，preservation，plagiarizing等，以及短语has a profound impact on，disposable plastic containers，in case of，bring to its full play, bring benefit to以及最后一段中虚拟语气、倒装句使用是否正确。避免使用汉语式英语；检查文章标点符号是否正确。

　　2.润色

　　例如：Only by the co-efforts of the whole society could green campus work smoothly and bring benefit to peoples well-beings中使用倒装句的结构，凸显考生的语法功底。

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