第一段思路点评:
综述网络给人们生活带来的多彩和便捷。两个长句足矣。第一句用if引导的条件句引出网络话题,第二句概述网络带给多彩和便捷的生活。
语言点提示:
has drawn..., realized, and provided此为谓语连动式的运用。
第二段思路点评:
详述网络与人们生活的紧密关系,先总述,后分述。
语言点提示:
resort to借助、诉诸、求助于
第三段思路点评:
先陈述人们对网络的依赖,再谈对此的看法。
语言点提示:
negative effects副作用、反面作用
addicts成瘾者、依恋者
fantasy world虚拟世界、虚幻世界
pornography色情表演、色情作品
fraud欺骗、诈骗
【范文2】
As a primary source of information as well as an efficient means of communication, the Internet offers people a colourful and convenient life. Just by clicking the mouse, we can enjoy a brilliant and easy life that could not be achieved ever before: shopping, making friends, contacting relatives, looking for jobs, downloading music and movies, conducting business deals, and freely airing our opinions.
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