最后,再看Project Hope这篇段首句作文题。根据所给材料和题目,这篇文章的主题思想是,希望工程对我国的建设具有重大的意义。第一段的段首句是希望工程的定义。要拓宽这个定义,续写内容应放在希望工程的作用、目的、意义上。第二段主题句的核心词是important。扩展句应从国家建设、教育的角度来论述希望工程的重大意义。第三段的段首给出In my opinion这一介词短语,提醒我们这一段应阐述自己对希望工程的看法。但要注意紧扣主题思想,避免离题。请看下面的范文:
Project Hope
①Project Hope is an urgent measure that our government has taken to help poor children in China who cannot afford to go to school. ②The project aims at providing underprivileged children with tuition fees, setting up new primary schools, and supplying poorly equipped elementary schools with better teaching facilities.③This project is of great importance to our country. ④In the first place, it brings great hope to thousands of children who can now sit again in their classrooms and acquire knowledge, which will be very useful to their future. ⑤Secondly, as most children have access to education, it will lead to the enhancement of the intelligence level in our country. ⑥Thus the project will benefit the modernization of our country a lot.⑦In my opinion, the project has a far-reaching influence on the construction of our country. ⑧How well a country is developed is largely depends on how well its people are educated. ⑨Therefore, more work should be done to persuade our people throughout the country to make greater contributions to the Project Hope. ①希望工程的定义 ②希望工程的目的 ③主题句/重要性④理由一 ⑤理由二⑥小结/重申希望工程的重要性 ⑦我的意见/看法⑧证明我的看法⑨呼吁人们采取行动支持希望工程
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