修改后的句子语气显得稍强一些。同时因为句中省掉了you,使句子在语气上减少了对抗性。这个解题对策适用于每种人称,不单单指you。
Plain: If one imitates, one cannot expect to be great.
Interesting: No person ever yet became great by imitation.
Plain: If we want to end a war quickly, we must lose it.
Interesting: The quickest way to end a war is to lose it.
Plain: If we were directed from government bureaucracy when to sow, and when to reap, we should soon want bread.
Interesting: Were we directed from government bureaucracy when to sow, and when to reap, we should soon want bread.
Plain: Several staff members have checked the manuscript to see if it is accurate and easy to use.
Interesting: Several staff members have checked the manuscript for accuracy and ease of use.
Plain: If words are taken out of context, they are not very likely to mean the same as they do when they are in context.
Interesting: Words taken out of context do not always mean what they do in context.
另一个被广为使用的从句是even though或although。请注意在此谈论的并不是句子的错误,我们强调的是文体风格问题。
Plain: Although they were very important in California, laundries were even more significant in other parts of the United States, for laundering was one of the four pioneer occupations that enabled Chinese to move eastward across the continent.
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