Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is necessary for college students to participate in social practice. However, social practice may bring some problems. For example, some students spend too much time in taking part-time jobs so as to ignore their study. Therefore, we should try to balance the relationship between social practice and study.
【亮点点评】
平行结构。alike意为类似的,作后置定语。
毫无疑问,副词使用恰当。
从中受益很多。
过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
把知识运用到解决实际问题中。
加强社会责任感。
用于得出结论。considering用作介词,意为考虑到,鉴于。
平衡之间的关系。
佳句临摩
1.佳句:More and more students choose to be the volunteers, take part-time jobs, or take part in other activities alike.
临摩:参加社交活动、结识新人和结交新朋友是新生融入大学生活的有效办法。
2.佳句:Undoubtedly, college students have benefited a lot from social practice.
临摩:毫无疑问,阅读经典书籍使人们受益匪浅。
3.佳句:Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is necessary for college students to participate in social practice.
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