In order to solve the conflict, both parents and children should pay their efforts. For one thing, parents should give their children rights to make their own decisions. They may help their children make choices instead of replacing them to make choices. For another, children should learn to respect their parents advices since parents tend to have more life experience. Besides, to communicate with each other actively is necessary to their understanding each other. As long as both parents and children learn to think from the other sides point of view, the conflicts between them can be avoided.

　　【亮点点评】

　　和一致。

　　表示递进。

通过转折和设问句引出原因,容易引起注意。

　　过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。

　　who引导非限制性定语从句。

　　为了，表示目的，常用于句首。

　　代替，而不是。

　　since引导原因状语从句，表示既定的原因，常译为既然。

　　从对方的角度。

　　佳句临摩

　　1.佳句：Parents expectations for their children are not always in accordance with their childrens personal ideals, and sometimes they are even conflicting with each other.

　　临摩：过多的压力使得许多大学生产生抑郁、焦虑等心理疾病，甚至导致一些大学生自杀。

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