例4.
As is shown by the bar chart, we can see that great changes have been taken place in a big city in China during the year from 1990 to 2000. The number of stated-owned houses is on the decline, while the private houses are on the rise.
To get the sourse of this changes, it is nature for us to come up with the following reasons. In the first place, owning to the advance in peoples living standard ,people are better off today, and they have more money to buy a house .In the second place , with the development of society and economy, some achievements have been maken in housing construction. Last but not least, thanks to the increasing consciousness of confortable life, people are in favor of buying a house. All this results in the boom of private housing.
Benefits of this changes are obvious. It is advantage to both people and society. For one thing, with house, people can enjoy their confortable life. For another, this changes can stimulate our nations economic development.
点评:切题。
表达思想清楚,网语句通顺。
但有少量语言错误。
例5.
It can be obviously seen from the chart above that our modern society has experienced a great change, and in the last decade, from 1990 to 2000, more and more people prefer private houses to state-owned ones.
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