例5.
During the SARS period in this spring, the year of 2003, one of my classmates, Li ming, was struck down by the virus and was immediately sent to hospital.
The news spread quickly on campus. At first, we were terrified and wondered if we were infected too. However, through our governments publicity on mass media, we gradually conquered the fear and set out to try out best to help her. Some teachers provided darly necessities while some students recorded the English class contents for him so that Li ming could not be left behind. With our care and concern, Li ming recovered quickly.
Such an incident teaches us a good moral. Our society is full of love, warm and peaceful, in which people-from man to woman, from individual to individual-lend others a hand. Just like a famous song goes, the world will turn itto heaven only if everyone contributes a little. and I do believe that its my great honor to live in this love-filled paradise!
点评:本文切题,论证丰富生动,表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好。基本上无大的语言错误,仅有个别小错误。
2003年9月六级考试作文题:
图表作文,关于一个美国大学图书馆的图书流动量,给出他们的流动比例对比,说明原因,并说明你自己喜欢阅读什么样的书。
例1.
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