此分段标准为条理不清,思路紊乱,大部分句子均有严重错误。
例2.
From the novel, we can see that the students like read novel, at the same time, only small part of students like read science and art.
The reason to this is novel is intereting, students like reading it. Most of the students read too much major books when they have classes, so they want to read some interesting they have time. Novel can let them relax. So they choose novel.
I like read novel, by reading it I know a lot of things, I also relax my brains. So I choose the novel.
点评:基本切题。
表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。
有较多的严重语言错误。
字数不够,要酌情扣分。
例3.
We can know from the picture that most of students like reading popular novel instead of reading science, poetry. From this we can know different people have different addiction to books.
Different people have different addiction to books. They read different books just to meet their different needs. Because different people have different meets to read the different kinds of books. From this we can also see that different people have different intentions and notions. So they choose the different things to meet their needs in every facet in life.
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