2003年6月考试四级作文题:An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident
假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸,就此写一份见证书。
见证书须包括以下几点:
1、车祸发生的时间及地点;
2、你所见到的车祸情况;
3、你对车祸原因的分析。
例1.
At 9:00, Jan. 20, 2003, I eye-witness a traffic accident in Dongfang Street.
I see that a old people is hitted by a car.
In my opinion, the rapid driver is the main reason, but the old people also has his error.
点评:字数明显不够,考试大尽管都点题了,但只有三句话。
有语法错误。
例2.
In my opinion, the driver of Benz auto should be blamed on the traffic accident. It was his drunk driving that resulted in this accident.
It is not doubt that the traffic accident is a high topic in the modern society, different people have different attitude to this.
When it come to the accident, people think it responsible for the driver. But last Sunday I see a accident. A woman crossed a street when a car turn the crossing .it is too late to stop the car ,The women was bad hurt. The people who was walking along the street took the woman to hospital, the driver came with them.
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