in addition, furthermore, also, moreover, besides, again, and, likewise, whats more
时间顺序
afterwards, at last, at length, immediately, in the meantime, lately, meanwhile, presently, shortly, since, soon, temporarily, thereafter, while
方位序列
in front of, beside, beyond, above, below, inside, outside, on the left, on the right
方式手段
as, as if, as though, the way,by
目的关系
that, so that, lest, in case, for fear that, in order that
二、书写工整,避免严重语言错误。
分析修改下面的作文:
Traffic has became an socially problem in big cities. Of course, have a car is a good think, but every people own a car, the streets will became too crowded. Traffic Jams occurred on the rush hours and accidents happened more often.
One way to solving this problem is develop group transportion system. Such as, we should buy more bus and built more roads. And underground trains is also a good solution.
Another way is to reduce the big citys population.
Our country population control is the wise and necessary police. If big city people reduce, traffic will less crowded.
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