I dont have many friends, but I do have a few. I have both male and female friends. We do sports together, go shopping together; and we exchange our views and ideas and share happiness and sadness. Of course we help each other if necessary.
I always consider myself a lucky person. I am lucky in my family, I am lucky in my career, I am lucky in my friendship, I am lucky in many things. In one word, I am lucky in life. I am really grateful for all these.
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行文点评
作者由表及里地介绍了自己的方方面面。第一段围绕average一词描写了外貌,先让读者在感官上对我有了总体的印象。第二段介绍职业以及职业给我带来了什么。第三段介绍兴趣爱好。第四段简述性格特征。第五段叙述与朋友间的友谊。最后作者用了6个lucky来总结全文。
文中每一段的主题都十分鲜明。语言简朴真实,行文流畅,简洁而鲜活地刻画了一个真实的我。
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自我介绍
我叫安德里亚。也许普通一词最能形容我。我中等身材,不胖也不瘦,不白也不黑。我有一张瘦削的脸,双眼皮,翘鼻子,我乌黑的头发又短又直,从未留过长发。我长得既像妈妈又像爸爸,不过我继承了他们的优点。
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