Still, college students often reason that horror stories about incarcerated Americans overseas will never happen to me! In his MP article Legal Rights of Travelers, international law expert Jeffrey R. Miller describes some of the penalties facing the errant traveler. These can be extreme by American standards.
However, safety is indeed everyones responsibility. The school program, the parents and the student all need to take part. Avoid potentially troublesome situations because as a foreigner you are more vulnerable. Be more cautious than at home. Heres an obvious but critically important safety rule: Always let someone know where you are and never travel alone.
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行文点评
文章第一段便指出,出国留学除了考虑健康和人身安全之外,还要考虑到更多其他的因素。第二段指出最常见的安全隐患。第三段指出陌生环境下孩子们可能的反常行为。第四段指出孩子们对安全问题掉以轻心的态度。第五段总结全文,并提出了一些安全建议。
本文语句十分地道,句式多样。段落之间存在的一些具有连接功能的词语,如still, however等,让文章连贯性更强。
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留学在外
我们将出国留学看作是生命中的一次冒险。在留学过程中,最需要考虑的是你的健康和人身安全。除非你预先做一些安排,否则的话,一个年少的孩子生活在远离父母的异地他乡,可能会面临一些文化困扰,或者某种真正的、伤及人身的危险。尤其是由汽车或者摩托车而造成的事故。另外我们最好在孩子临行之前,预先考虑到更多其他的因素。
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