But teaching offers something besides money and power: it offers love. Not only the love of learning and of books and ideas, but also the love that a teacher feels for that rare student who walks into a teachers life and begins to breathe. Perhaps love is the wrong word: magic might be better.
I teach because, being around people who are beginning to breathe, I occasionally find myself catching my breath with them.
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行文点评
文章第一段到第四段都采用了I teach because...的句型开头,句式统一,在内容上构成了并列。每段的第一句即为该段的主题句,先指出自己想要当老师的原因,接着再具体进行解释。在第五段中,作者用So概括了上述原因,再次重申Why I Teach,呼应主题。第六段开头借助However一词的过渡,指出教书最重要的理由,和前文构成了语义上的递进。文章最后一段还是用I teach because...结尾,与段首相呼应,使文章显得有始有终。
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我为什么当老师
我教书,是因为我喜爱学校日程的安排。六月、七月和八月这三个月的暑假提供了一个思考、研究和创作的机会。
我教书,是因为教学是建立在变化基础上的职业。虽然教材还是原来的不变,但我自身却变了,更重要的是,我的学生变了。
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