四、表达思想内容空洞
中国学生表达思想时往往太空洞。具体来说就是表达思想时只陈述一个中心思想,如谈到一个大学的好坏时,会说 The university has a good library.The university has excellent sports facilities. 就此就停止了,而没有据地展开。
要想避免表达思想内容空洞就一定按照上面大学图书馆一例来把自己的想法展开。需要展开到多细,可以根据你的知识面而定,但这种表达思想的思路是至关重要的,这就是说,文章一定要有细节。现在请你把 The university has excellent sports facilities.展开。
五、文化背景差异
在阐述思想时能把中国文化中普遍认同的东西表达出来,却没有能够把中国人为何普遍认同这种东西其背后的原因和条件讲出来。因为美国人对其背后的原因和条件一无所知,就无法明白你想表达的思想观点,甚至会认为你所表达的观点是荒唐的。比如说,一个学生在谈到在中国用什么交通工具最好这一问题时,阐述了这一观点Only the very wealthy people can afford to buy a car.为了使美国人真正理解这句话,就必须按下边方法来交代原因和条件:
The living standard in China is very low. The average monthly income per person even in large and affluent cities is about 100 U.S. dollars. This income is just enough to cover the family expenses, without any money let for savings. Furthermore, cars in China are far more expensive than in the United States. The cheapest car in China would be about 10,000 dollars. Very few people in China can save enough to purchase a car, not to mention the cost of car maintenance.
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