改句:
The development of science and technology has brought the process to mankind while our surrounding natural environment is greatly destroyed.
【解析】
原句是一句典型的转折句,在四六级作文中,although和though的应用相当广泛,那么如何使自己与众不同呢,在此,我为大家推荐一个连 词while,这个单词有很多意思,但在改句中,它的意思是虽然、尽管,在考场上用的人相对比较少,所以以后在作文中,如果出现了转折、对比之类 的关系句,记住要想到while哦!
例6
原句:
It is very important for the public to acquire knowledge on Sinology. Because it stands for Chinese civilization with more than 5000 years and promoting Sinology can help to build a harmonious society.
改句:
It is of vital significance for the public to acquire knowledge on Sinology. For one thing, it is the essence of Chinese civilization with more than 5000 years. For another, the promotion of Sinology can contribute to a harmonious society.
【解析】
咋看原句,基本上没什么可以改的地方,但是仔细观察,我们不难发现原句中的very important是英语四六级作文中常用的词,所以我们需要想办法使其看起来不那么普通,我想的办法就是把它转换成of+名词的短语,这个名词可 以是importance,也可以是其同义词significance。
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