改词扩句
不改变原句的意思,仅通过词汇、语法手段使句子看起来更高级、地道。下面请看例子:
例1
Others think that the utilization of waste products will be eliminated sooner or later with the emergence of hi-te . However, I did not consider that factor carefully. Because I hold the view that waste materials can be made good use of to help reduce the living cost.
原句:I did not consider that factor carefully.
改句:I fail to take that factor into careful consideration.
【解析】
在这个简单句中,主要做了两个改变,一是把did not改成fail to, 同样的意思,可是词汇应用的灵活度却大大提高。
二是把considercarefully改成了take sth into careful consideration,在考场作文中,词组的运用是个亮点,而且英语中静态居多(名词用的多),汉语中动态居多(动词用的多),在此把动词consider变成名词consideration,顿时使英文更加地道。
例2
原句:
You are enthusiastic and enterprising. And you are one of the most talented and diligent in our department. You have already won 2 awards for good academic results.
改句:
You, enthusiastic and enterprising,are one of the most talented and diligent in our department,already winning 2 awards for outstanding academic results.
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