(六)连词方面的错误
作文中缺少必要的连词,或错用连词的现象也比较普遍。
(误)One should improve his English,one should overcome difficulties in studies.
(正)If one wants to improve his English,he should overcome difficulties in studies.
【说明】学生在写作中往往意识不到连词的重要,不善于使用连词和连接副词来明确标示出因果关系、转折关系、递进关系等。
(七)搭配方面的错误
学生作文中用词搭配方面的错误也占有较大比例。记得在一次六级作文阅卷中,近千篇作文在表达上海交通越来越拥挤这个意思时,几乎没有一篇用 heavier,大多数人用的是The traffic in Shanghai is getting more and more crowded,而traffic是不能与crowded搭配的。
1.(误)However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.
(正)However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.
【说明】speed只能和high,low,good,top,normal,fantastic,moderate,surprising等搭配,不能与fast,quick,slow搭配。但可以这样说A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.
2.(误)In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.
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