Considering the seriousness of the traffic problem, it is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it. Firstly, the government should invest more money to improve public transportation and provide more transportation ways for people to choose. Secondly, stricter laws and regulations should be made to punish those who break traffic regulations. Finally, drivers should enhance safety awareness and develop good driving manners. Only in this way could road accidents be avoided successfully.
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佳句临摹
1.佳句:In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses and some of them even lose their lives.
临摹:一些人失败后可能会变得灰心丧气,甚至会放弃成功的希望
2.佳句:More and more vehicles on road increase the chances of accidents.
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