六级高分作文的写作模式及经典范文（三）_大学英语写作

六级高分作文的写作模式及经典范文（三）

　　To conclude, all great men achieve success through diligence, devotion and perseverance. Just as the famous saying goes, No pains, no gains , Where there is a will, there is a way.

　　谋篇布局( 4 )

　　将提示中的第一句做为第一段主题句，然后拓展开

　　将提示的第二句做为第二段的主题句，拓展说明

　　将提示的第三句拓展成第三段，但注意与上面两段的照应，使其有总揽全文的作用

　　例文

　　标题： On Housing Reform

　　提示： 1 )旧房屋政策的弊端;

　　2 )房改带来的好处;

　　3 )我怎么办?

　　The old house-allotting policy had at least two disadvantages. First, the government spent a lot of money building some houses, but these houses were allotted to people free of charge. Thus, the government would have no money to build more houses for people who badly needed them. Second, the persons who were in power could get more houses than those who were powerless. This was quite unfair.

　　On the contrary, the new system of house allotment may bring about many new things. For example, the government will have more money which can be used in house construction. So, the housing industry can develop more quickly. Besides, because houses will be sold to people, the chances they get will be equal.