As far as I am concerned. (改为逗号) In order to keep our healthy psychical environment(改为us psychologically healthy).They can do some exercise on theirfree-times and talk with their friends usually. It is best way of relax. This ways can help us take mind off the job. I believe we will gain more achievement in our future.(你写的是在未来会获得更大的成功,这与心理健康问题无关)
同学你好,你需要提高英语的表达能力,建议你多背一些好的范文,摘抄一些好的句子,并将其运用到你的作文之中,另外,要注意单复数以及主谓一致的问题。
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