很多人发现参加爱心活动颇为有益。而且,有一句比喻/话可以描述爱心的重要性:爱心就是一盏灯,越是黑暗的地方越明亮。在我看来,身处黑暗中的人需要更多爱心,即便是一点帮助也能给他们带来光明。
二段:意义阐述:阐述爱心的重要意义。
(意义主题句)Love is the key tobuilding a harmonious society, and it can be likened tolight in dark places.(具体意义1:词汇排比)To begin with, as a vital quality, it bring people power, arouses their enthusiasm forlife, and helps them tocreate a promising future.(具体意义2:强调句式)In addition, it is love or others help that enablespeople in difficulties to build upconfidence, courage and hope.(万能表达:)As a matter of fact, individuals in mounting numbers have come to realize the significance of love: love from friends, classmates and family.
爱心是建设和谐社会的关键,而且爱心可以被必做黑暗中的一盏灯。首先,作为一种重要素质,爱心带给人们力量,唤醒人们的生活热情,帮助人们创造光明的未来。此外,也正是爱心是的人们积累起信心,勇气和希望。事实上,越来越多的人们已经意识到爱的重要性:朋友之爱、同学之爱、家人之爱。
尾段:举例说明爱心(即现象)+建议
(举例)A case in point is Hope Project.(调查法描述)According to a survey, a majority of people in China admit thatthey are willing to help those children, who can not afford tuition.(建议)Thus, we should educate, advocate and encouragemore people tobe involved in activities of love.(展望未来)If we try our utmost to do so, the future ofour nation will be promising and rosy.
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