Why the users of cellphoneincrease(改为increased)so quickly?Initially, the primary reason is that the increase of income. With the higher income, people would(加be)willing to enjoy a moreconvinencelife. Another equally significant reason for this change is the decrease ofthe cost of making a cellphone. Taking advantage of the high technology,theindurstrycan use little labor and cheapermeterialto produce cellphones. All of these have made the price of cellphone affordable.
This phenomenon is a signal of the increase of peoplelife(改为living)comdition(拼写错误,改为condition)and the spread of high technology,which is a really good thing for the society(语法错误). There is no doubt that in the future, with thecontinuesly(改为continuous)increaseof economy and technology, more and more people will havethe cellphone and enjoy theconvinence(拼写错误,改为convenience)of it.
The number of是的数量的意思,谓语动词用单数;a number of是大量的意思,谓语动词用单数。Initially和the primary reason的意思一样。写作文时细心一点,尽量避免单词拼写的错误。注意固定搭配。Which放在逗号后面,修饰的是前面一整句话的内容。
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