[6]Facing the increasingly fierce competition, we university students should try our bests to change this situation. [3]Above all, when in school, we should make the most of our time and [7]put our heart into our studies. [3]Whats more, we can take part-time jobs and attend social activities in our spare time to [8]accumulate relevant practical experience. [3]Besides, when we apply for jobs after graduation, we should [9]attach more importance to accumulating experience than to the starting salary.
【作文点评】
[1]过去和现在进行对比。
[2]设问句引出原因,容易引起注意。
[3]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[4]大学生供过于求。
[5]倾向,趋于。
[6]面对日趋激烈的竞争,现在分词作状语。
[7]用心学习。
[8]积累相关的实际经验。
[9]更加关注。
佳句临摹
1.佳句:Facing the increasingly fierce competition, university students should try their best to change this situation.
临摹:经历过艰苦,我们就会更懂得如何应对危机。
2.佳句:They should attach more importance to accumulating experience than to their starting salary
临摹:很显然,我们应该更加关注一个人的能力,而不是他的学历。
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