To change the present unfavorable situation all of us must make immediate and substantial efforts. The government should try it best to create a social atmosphere in which people cherish diligence, conscience and simplicity. Teachers and schools should make every effort to teach the students to grow up into responsible and enterprising citizens who are determined to contribute to the development of the community, the nation and the whole world. Parents should let students get in touch with the society, helping them know that a meaningful life is one that brings significance to others. Only in this way can we hope to solve such a disturbing problem and ensure the brilliant future of our nation.
点评:
该文共分三段。第一段描述图画。一般说来,先描述图画,后点明主题的情形比较多这样写重在归纳,比较重视逻辑和事物发展的内部联系。而本文首句即点明主题,即本文所述的现象孩子吹嘘父亲职位、相互攀比的现象这样写开门见山,非常有力度。
第二段写了该现象产生的原因。第一句话是段落的主题句,而后分社会、媒体和老师三个方面来说。
第三段写解决问题的办法,第一句话是主题句,之后分别写政府、老师和家长正确的做法。这里没有使用象first,second,third这样的连接词,但由于采用了平行的主语,仍达到了结构清晰的效果。最后一句话是结论句,使用了强势的倒装句,句中使用了连词and,前面写解决问题,正好与提纲相扣,后面写保证国家的美好明天,是升华的部分,请大家用心体会末句的写法。
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