也正是因为以上三点在引入部分的重要性的不同,对于事件的描述,有的时候是可以放入一个从句中去而成为一种背景信息,而不必非将它作为独立的部分写出不可(这一点请不熟悉作文模板的考生勿试,试不好会画虎不成反类犬的,请谨慎)。
就willingking的第一段试改如下,以供参考。
As is shown in the picture above, a hand is tightly glued to a computer mouse linked to a personal computer by an iron chain. Clearly, the iron chain stands for the control of the computer over the person who indulges himself in the cyberspace. An implication from the picture can be figured out that the personal computer, a high-tech device originally created for saving time and energy so as to benefit humankind, ironically turns out to be a gadget murdering the time and energy of quite some people.
willingking的第二段析评:
Obviously, it goes without saying that the drawing aims at revealing a common and serious problem: today, more and more people indulge themselves in playing computers . Due to lack of self-control, people indulge in computer deeply. Whats more, this addiction does more harm to humankind than good. For instance, when a student gets lost in games, he should loses his interest in study. Similarly, when an adult indulges in on-line games, he may totally lacks concern about other stuffs. By indulging in games, they may get lost when they are dropping into the fictitious characters and fabricated stories and may not care for the reality.
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