考研英语小作文批改例文第三期求职信_大学英语写作

考研英语小作文批改例文第三期求职信

　　8-10分

　　第一篇

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I just read an advertisement on the internet about the recruitment information. I would like to apply for a position as a physician.

　　I am a graduate of Peking University with a doctor degree in clinical medicine. I know which(改为what) qualities a doctor should possess and I think I have these qualifications. My specialized skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. I have the confidence to be one of you.

　　I will be happy to meet with you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thank you for your consideration.

　　Yours sincerely,

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　　8分

　　同学你好，你的作文写的很好，但是一定要注意书信的写作格式。另外，which一定要有选项。

　　第二篇

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I just read an advertisement in a magazine about job searchingI would like to apply for a position as a sales manager.

　　I understand efficient marketing strategy .My communication skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your conditions in the advertisement .I am a recent graduate of Beijing University with a bachelor degree in marketing management. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as a salesman at ABC Company during my spare time. .