Inthe developed areas,the newly-built chemicalfactories have discharged harmful and even poisonousgas and liquid which had aseriously negatively impact on the surroundingenvironment.(拉长后31个单词)
例2中短句拉长的步骤:
1)在句首,加上地点状语in the developed areas
2)在名词factories前面加上两个修饰形容词newly-built和chemical
3)在名词gas and liquid 后面上加上一个定语从句whichhad a seriously negatively impact on the surroundingenvironment.
高分句式二插入语
增加句式复杂性的另外一种方法就是使用插入语。中国学生写的英语句子喜欢一通到底,没有任何语气的间歇,像一根笔直的竹竿,因此笔者称之为竹竿句。而英美人士写的句子则不同,他们偏爱插入语,通过插入语表现出作者语气的间歇和停顿。有了插入语,读者眼中的句子有一种跌宕起伏的感觉,这种句子像海浪一起忽起忽落,笔者称这种句子为海浪句。试比较:
Ancientmen made tools of stone. For instance, they always usedflint becauseit is easier to shape than other kinds. (不使用插入语)
Fortunately,however,ancient men made tools ofstone,especially flint,because it is easier to shape than other kinds. (使用插入语)
我们用图形表示这两个句子,如下:
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