I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

　　exceedingly 替换 very;(个人认为替换成overwhelmingly更出彩)

　　thrilling 替换 exciting;

　　sth. exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth;

　　google 替换 search;

　　an army of 替换 a lot of。

　　The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

　　The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;

　　Increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular;

　　Coincident with 非常地道的句型，表达与一致的意思，替换 With

　　Advancement 替换 development;

　　Pour into 替换 enter into;

　　Current 替换 now;

　　Appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth.;

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