2014年谈考研英语作文破解_大学英语写作

2014年谈考研英语作文破解

　　阅读以下的这篇文章：

　　China has rapidlydeveloping in recent years. (错误1)Accorodingto the economic datas by the government, our country haschanged stronger thanbefore.(错误2) So with it followed there are a phenomenon calledChina hotin manyother countries.(错误3)that is, foreigners are popular with tralve to China,wearingtraditional Chinesecostume,eating Chinese diet,even learning Chinese andBeijing Opera.However,isthat the picture tell us?Certainly not.(错误4)The Americangirl is not only wearing a traditional Chinese costumebut expressing Chinesetraditional cultural sign.furthermore,this picture abovedoes convey a truththat the national culture is international culture,(错误5)and that iseasily to understand.

　　这个段落的首句为Chinahas rapidly developing in recent years. 可以说，当这位考生写了这句话的时候，离低分也就不太远了。也许你觉得我说的有点危言耸听，但是这篇文章在阐述段的开头位置写中国发展快，这本身就远远地脱离了文章写作的中心。这样这个段落就成了证明中国经济发展快，而不是民族文化、世界文化了。这篇文章最为致命的一个问题就是：二段用引言句开篇(中国经济发展快是个被广大考生写烂了的引言句，这样三句话写完了都没有出现文章主题词。

　　喵哥建议1：建议考生将主题词前置到二段段首，用重要要重视的写法开篇，然后用先熟悉万能意思框架，然后选择最明确简单的关联词即可，注意以下的文章写法：on the one hand, on the other hand, by doing so, 这样的连词形成中间段引申的粘结，尽量多写和文化交流有关的句子。然后用这种做法会造成积极/消极影响的写法结尾。 The primary purpose of thispicture is that cultural exchanges arenot only necessary, but also indispensable,so we are supposed to emphasizetheir role in a country. One the one hand,(串接词1) they will invariably enhance friendly ties between countriesandimprove their mutual understanding between peoples. On the other hand,(串接词2)they canpromote communication betweenpeople in these countreis and remove the barrierbetween them. In the long run,