考研英语作文靓词替换高分策略_大学英语写作

考研英语作文靓词替换高分策略

　　3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如第一条的例子中，applicable替换proper; approaches替换ways; implement替换carry out; sharpen ones competitive edge替换enhance ones competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)。

　　下面举一篇某位同学写的优秀作文的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法，精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

　　I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.

　　exceedingly 替换 very；（个人认为替换成overwhelmingly更出彩）

　　thrilling 替换 exciting；

　　sth. exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth；

　　google 替换 search；

　　an army of 替换 a lot of。

　　The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!