剖析:整个句子可以大大简化。
改为:Diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need.
九。不连贯(Incoherence)
不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语,或是结构上不畅通。这也是考生常犯的毛病。
病句:The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.
剖析:The fresh water 与逗号后的it 不连贯。It 与things 在数方面不一致。
改为:Fresh water is the most important thing in the world.
十。综合性语言错误(Comprehensive Misusage)
所谓综合性语言错误,是指除了上述错误以外,还有诸如时态、语态、标点符号、大小写等方面的错误。
病句:Today, Money to everybody is very importance, ours eat, cloth, live, go etc.
可改为:Today money is very important for everybody to live in the world.
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