? Yes, it does, as beaches are in general are places which people enjoy going to. Leave this point in

Reviewing the rest of the points, numbers 2,3,6,8,9, and 13 were eliminated because they were not points which would really support the topic. It is OK to delete points. Some were negative aspects of the city, which to not add to its level of pleasantness, or simply were not very important. The writer decided to combine points number four and eleven, as they are similar.

Choosing your supporting points

After you have gone through your list of points, list the ones you want to use in your paragraph. Remember that all of them must support the general topic of the paragraph: Los Angeles is a pleasant place to live. Our writer has chosen the following points:

1. great climate

2. beaches and mountains are close

3. many college and universities to choose from

4. diverse multicultural population

5. good geographical location for visiting the rest of the world

The above can be considered major supporting points for the topic sentence: Los Angeles is a pleasant place to live. Now, lets do a full outline (or mind map) and list some supporting details for these points. It might look like this:

1. Los Angeles is a very pleasant place to live.

2. The climate is really great.

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