e.g.The key words of each topic sentence in the above writing are:vivid world,educational role in daily life,harmful。
4)Find out the relationships between the topic sentences;
From the given topic sentences,we can see that the second topic sentence is a further development of the first one.The transitional wordalsoshows that the two topic sentences are parellel.So we have to write the advantages of television in the first two paragraphsin the first paragraph,writevivid world,while in the second,educational roleIn the third topic sentence,the transitional word Howeverchanges the point of view from positivevivid,educationalto negativeharmful。Thus,we should write the disadvantages of television in the paragraph.
Model Essay 29-1
Television
Television presents a vivid world in front of us.On television,we can watch exciting football matches or Olympic marathons.We cantravelto New York to visit its famous monuments and museums or to London to attend the royal wedding.We can alsogoto a concert with a cup of coffee in one hand. With a TV set,we can take part in many events without leaving the house.
Television can also play an educational role in our daily life.Besides regular courses to TV university students,television also offers various educational programmes for different viewers.Children likeTan gramyoung people like theABC of Computersand elderly people likeLife and Health。Of all the educational programmes,English on Sunday is my favourite.
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