一个好的段落应该具有统一性。统一性就是一个中心思想统领整个段落。每个细节都应支持主题句,不应有无关的细节。为了支持主题,要尽可能多地提供细节,但又要避免滥用细节。
读下面段落,然后找出毛病。
① Innovations, whether practical or aesthetic, are often resisted by the general population.② When the early experiments in the field of aviation began their work, there were many who said,If God had wanted man to fly, he would have given him wings.③The Wright brothers made the first powered flights in a heavier-than-air craft in 1903 at Kitty Hawk, North Carolina.④Even today there are many who strongly object to modern art and music as being nothing more than splashes of paint and honking horns.⑤The painter Picassos well-known masterpiece The Three Musicians is done primarily in blues and browns.
6.5段落分析
主题句: Innovations, whether practical or aesthetic, are often resisted by the general population.
推展细节:1. Peoples objection to the early experiments in the field of aviation.
2. Peoples objection to modern art and music.
无关细节:1. The Wright brothers experiment in flight.
2.Picassos painting.
显然这不是个好的段落,因为并非所有的推展句都支持主题句。应该把无关的细节删去。下图是一个有统一性的段落的结构图。
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