They have tried to live in the same room several times, and even aGREed on the color they liked best and the kind of furniture they wanted. But Lanlan likes to keep things neat and tidy, while Miaomiao acts as if there were a servant around to pick up all the things that get thrown on the floor or over the edge of the chair or into the bathtub⑤. Lanlan likes to go to bed early and get up early. In contrast Miaomiao does not seem to have any definite habits, often goes to bed very late, and then wants to sleep late the next day when Lanlan wants to get the day started.
【词语解释】
①feature n.(复数)面貌;相貌
②latest fashion 最新流行式样
③irritating a.引起不愉快的
④nightclub n.夜总会
⑤bathtub n. 浴缸;澡盆
【写法指要】
1)本文每个段落都是用异同型(samdiff pattern)组织起来的,先写二者相同点,后写二者的不同点。谈到不同点时,每一段用的都是交替型(seesaw pattern),先说A,后说B,或先说B后说A。
2)用上述方式写对比型说明文时,作者多用表示相反或对照的衔接词(adversatives),如本文中用到的however, but, while, whereas, in contrast等,使段落和全文的语义连贯。
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