教你如何写出具有雅思范儿的高分作文_雅思英语写作

教你如何写出具有雅思范儿的高分作文

首先来看句1和句2，运用了特殊开头词的写作形式“in order to ”(介词短语放句首)及“Educating”(动名词放句首)。大部分同学写句子时，名词代词放句首的偏多，特殊开头词引出句子的方法这点我们也是可以学习的。

再来看句子中的respect and obey 这组，及what is important in life, how they are expected to behave and what role they will play in their world这组，两组都属于平行结构，一组是短语平行，一组是平行中最高级的用法——从句平行。

本段材料的最后这句，不仅是三个从句的平行，而且万能性还很强。我们可以把主句They will certainly be the first to help children learn中的主语They换成其他主语，如志愿服务工作。我们再来看下这个句子，志愿服务工作可以帮着孩子们学习什么是重要的，应该怎么做及应该在世界中起到怎样的作用。三个从句写出来，不仅句子长度拉长，同时还展示了考官书写从句的能力，最重要的是，考生们还可以学习到举一反三的句式!

最后来看下句2的谓语，共有两个，分别为begin 及be widely thought ，一主动一被动，这又何尝不是增加句子灵活度的方式?

接下来进入到主体段2：

However, learning to understand and share the value system of a whole societycannot be achieved just in the home.(1)Oncea child goes to school, they are entering a wider community where teachers and peers will have just as much influence as their parents do at home. (2)At school, children will experience working and living with people from a whole variety of backgrounds from the wider society. (3)This experience should teach themhow to co-operate with each other and how to contribute to the life of their community. (4)