修改:In my view, public services are vitalto our life, but...
三、动词词组用法
5. 原文:Nowadays, [an] increasing number of people concernedabout the enhancement of public services.
诊断:动词词组be concernedabout...表示“对……关注”。但这句话中使用时漏掉了be动词,导致整个句子语法错误。
修改:Nowadays,[an] increasing number of people are concerned about the enhancement of public services.
这时候需要注意的是,中括号内单词[an]表示已在原文中修改的错误。下同。
四、近似用法混淆
6. 原文:However, whether the government should allocate fund to publicservices other than waste...
诊断:考生原本想用的应该是rather than,表示“而不是”,却错误地写成了形式类似的other than,表示“除了……之外”,整句话的意思就改变了。
修改:However,whether the government should allocate fund to public services rather than waste...
五、非谓语动词用法
7. 原文:However, whether... to public services [rather] than waste money on arts is...
诊断:ratherthan是介词,后面可接名词或动名词形式,但此处考生错误地接了动词原形。
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