I appreciate it very much if you could change my phone for another new one that works well, preferably receive a refund for it, and I would like to have this matter settled by you within a week.
Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
第三篇
Dear shop assistant,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for the time you have taken to help me to look for my last wallet. If it had not been for your assistance in putting an inform and searching carefully every comers of the shop, I fear that I would have been lost several hundred yuan。
Every one agrees that it was you who were enthusiastic and friendly ,such as helping the elder customers to carry goods to their cars and the caser to find their lost things. Again,I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
修改意见:
Dear shop assistant,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for the time you have taken to help me to look for my last(拼写错误,lost) wallet. If it had not been for your assistance in putting an inform and searching carefully every comers (拼写错误 corner)of the shop, I fear that I would have been lost (have been lost 是迷路的意思,丢钱是have been losing )several hundred(加s) yuan.
Every one agrees that it was you who were (形容某人的品质时,用一般现在时,改为are)enthusiastic and friendly ,such as helping the elder customers to carry goods to their cars and the caser(拼写错误) to find their lost things. Again,I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
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