第四篇
Dear Sir,
I am a customer of your store. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about a box of pen that I bought it from yours.
The reason for my dissatisfaction is the quality of the pens is bad. In the first place,I found there is less two pens when I opened the box. In addition,a pen was broken and it didn’t work. Under these circumstances, I find it very to your store.
I appreciate it very much if you could give me there pens,preferably replace the whole box,and I would like to have this matter settled by one day.
Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
修改意见:
Dear Sir,
I am a customer of your store. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about a box of pen that I bought it(删除)from yours.
The reason for my dissatisfaction is the quality of the pens is bad(删除). In the first place,I found there is less two pens when I opened the box(不用there be 句型,可改为I found the box lacked of 2 pens when I opened it). In addition,a pen was broken and it didn’t work. Under these circumstances, I find it very to your store.
I appreciate it very much if you could give me there(改为the extra) pens,preferably replace the whole box,and I would like to have this matter settled by(因为后面加的是具体时间,因此这里改为in) one day.
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