2014考研英语写作小作文批改范文：投诉信（二）_大学英语写作

2014考研英语写作小作文批改范文：投诉信（二）

The reason for my dissatisfaction is that the phone can not meet my requirements. In the first place, the battery needs recharging after 5 hours of use. In addition, the internal mernory(单词拼写错误,改为memory card) is too small to store a song. Under these circumstances, I find it is(删除) regretful to bring the trouble which I can not accept it.(该句的意思是，由于上面提到的两个问题，使我感觉…)

I appreciate it very much if you could change the mpbile(单词拼写错误，改为mobile) phone for another model that works well, preferably return the full refund(改为 give me a full refund), and I would like to have this matter settled by 20 workdays.

Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

5-7分

第一篇

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a collage sophomore tenant of Room 388 in Dorm-building 5. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about our dorm management.

The reason for my dissatisfaction is our poor management and bad living environment. In the first place, our dormitory is not time limited use of electricity，the lights are not turn off at midnight. In addition, strangers can go in and out freely without any inquiries and checks. Under these circumstances, I find it difficult to bring me comfortable and safe study life.

I appreciate it very much if you could tighten up the management, preferably You could make the rules and regulations that strictly executed and I would like to have this matter settled by the next month. Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.