2014考研英语写作小作文批改范文：投诉信（二）_大学英语写作

2014考研英语写作小作文批改范文：投诉信（二）

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

修改意见：

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a collage (删除college)sophomore tenant of Room 388 in Dorm-building 5. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about our dorm management.

The reason for my dissatisfaction is our poor management and bad living environment. In the first place, our dormitory is not time limited use of electricity (改为power rationing, 如果你不知道该如何表达宿舍晚上不限电，那么你可以不写这一句，直接说灯一直是开着的就可以了)，the lights are not turn off(,turn off 的主语是人，可改为on) at midnight. In addition, strangers can go in and out freely without any inquiries and checks. Under these circumstances, I find it difficult to bring me (加a)comfortable and safe study(删除) life.

I appreciate it very much if you could tighten up the management, preferably You could make the rules and regulations that (加 will be)strictly executed(加逗号) and I would like to have this matter settled by the next month. Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

第二篇

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a buyer of your online store and I bought a mobile phone last week. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about some problems after I use it during a short period of time.