修改意见:
Dear Mark,
There will be a volunteer activitiy(拼写错误,改为activity) in the Children's Welfare Institute Of Nanjing on this weekend . We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 08:00.This will be followed by one more arrangement(此处应该写一个具体的活动) .At around10:00, there will be another activity after the performance(删除 ). All of us are going to Zhongshan park to have a Picnic, while helping Lily, the youngest girl in our group, to celebrity (改为celebrate)her birthday.(给某人过生日,不要用help)I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the deadline for (删除,RSVP before的意思就是在…之前通知我)September 15th.
第三篇
Dear Xiaohui,
There will a dinner party at my house on April 12, 2013. We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at six o’clock in the evening; with the taking photos. This will be followed by a dinner party. At around ten o’clock, we will have face party.
I really hope you can make it, RSVP be fore April 12, we look forward to the pleasure of your company.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
修改意见:
Dear Xiaohui,
There will (加be)a dinner party at my house on April 12, 2013. We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at six o’clock in the evening; with the taking photos.(删除) This will be followed by {a dinner party}. At around ten o’clock, we will have face party.(假面舞会是a masquerade ball )
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