The occasion will start at 6:00 o'clock in the evening. This will be followed by a hot dancing farewell with all students there. At around one hour later, the game concerning not only dare or truth but also table games will start.
I really hope you can make it and celebrate the festival with us.RSVP before December 27th.
Yours faithfully Li Ming
修改意见:
Dear Bob,
There will be a New Year party holded(改为held )by the Students' Union of Chinese Language and Literature Department at school stadium on January 1st. We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at 6:00 o'clock in the evening. This will be followed by a hot dancing(改为dance) farewell with(用词不当,farewell with 是和…挥别的意思,而在hot dance后面还有活动) all students there. At around one hour later(at around后面加具体的时间点), the game concerning not only dare or truth but also(改为dare or truth and ) table games will start.
I really hope you can make it and celebrate the festival with us(make it 就有后面和我们一起庆祝节日的意思了.) RSVP before December 27th.
5-7分
第一篇
Dear Kate,
There will be a Christmas party at English corner on Dec.25th. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 6 p.m. This will be followed by a game. At around 7 p.m. a meeting will be held. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before Dec.24th.
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