Campus English Corner
October 22, 2012
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Dear Kate,
There will be a Christmas party at English corner on Dec.25th. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 6 p.m. This will be followed by a game. At around 7 p.m. a meeting will be held. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before Dec.24th.
第二篇
Dear Miss Yuan,
There will be a celebrity party for the new year in the activity room on the next Saturday. We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at 6 o’clock in the evening. This will be followed by a serious of wonderful performances played by our classmates. At around 8 o’clock, we project some interaction activities to animate the atmosphere so as to promote the relationships of classmates. What’s more, we prepared some gifts to be presented to the winners.
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the next Wednesday.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
修改意见:
Dear Miss Yuan,
There will be a celebrity(改为celebration) party for the new year in the activity room on the next Saturday. We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at 6 o’clock in the evening. This will be followed by a serious(拼写错误,改为series) of wonderful performances played by our classmates. At around 8 o’clock, we project some interaction activities to animate the atmosphere so as to promote the relationships of classmates. What’s more, we prepared some gifts to be presented to the winners.
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