2014考研英语写作小作文批改范文：邀请信（二）_大学英语写作

2014考研英语写作小作文批改范文：邀请信（二）

The occasion will start at 9:00 to 11:00in the morning of the Weekend. This will be followed by a music gathering which you can communicate with others, also you can eat various kinds of delicious food. At around the next time to 5:00 pm, it is the free time for us to take a series of activities, such as playing cards, singing songs and so on.

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the final date that I have informed to you.

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

修改意见：

Dear Bob,

There will be a summer celebrate party for teenagers at the playground of Beijing Forgin (拼写错误，改为Foreign)University on this weekend. We would be honored to have you there with us.

The occasion will start at 9:00 to 11:00(start后面接的是具体的某个时间点)in the morning of the Weekend. This will be followed by a music gathering which you can communicate with others, also you can eat various kinds of delicious food. At around the next time to(删除) 5:00 pm, it is the free time for us to take a series of activities, such as playing cards ,singing songs and so on.

I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the final date that I have informed to you.(写一个具体的时间，例如本周四)

第五篇

Dear Mr.Bob,

There will be a nationwide academic communicatiom involved in the education of China in Peking University on Wendsday. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at eight o'clock am on that day. This will be followed by a dabate on social phenomenon nowadays. At around ten o'clock, there will be a interaction between parents and their childrens.