To solve the problem, I suggest that not only should the Ministry of Railways update or better the ticket-selling system regularly but also provide more convenient and easy ways for migrant workers to buy tickets. As for migrant workers, they can learn to purchase their tickets on-line with the help of Internet or co-workers. Choosing other means of transportation to return back is also available.
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试题分析:本文属于读写任务写作,动笔前,一定要认真阅读原文,并理解内容。认真看清题目要求,这篇书面表达给了一段材料:先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容,要求有很高的概括提炼的能力,要抓住文章的主题,再以约120个词写一篇短文,按照要点去表达,不能有遗漏,写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型,同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型,使自己的文章更有文采。
【亮点说明】文章简洁的总结了所给材料,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯,使用了词组和句型:cope with 处理,As for 至于,with the help of 在…的帮助下,Worse still更糟糕的是,
But this year, with another problem of buying tickets on-line appearing, many are dissatisfied. 这句话用了with复合结构, At that time, you can imagine how crowded it was in the railway station and how difficult it was for us to buy a ticket.这句话用了宾语从句和it做形式主语, For migrant workers, lacking the knowledge of handling computers has trapped them into trouble. 这句话用了动名词做主语, To solve the problem, I suggest that not only should the Ministry of Railways update or better the ticket-selling system regularly but also provide more convenient and easy ways for migrant workers to buy tickets.这句话用了不定式做目的状语。
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