→Without your help, I couldn't have won first place in the English Speaking Competition.(虚拟语气)(6)使用感叹句What a good time we had with the peasants that day!(感叹句)
(2015·浙江高考)在班级活动中当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人还是尊重大多数同学的意见?请你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”为题用英语写一篇100~120个词的短文。要求如下:
从以上两种做法中选择一种;
以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。
注意:短文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则按考试作弊行为认定。续表考生作文 点评与优化 作文提升When I Have a Different Opinion
In class activities, opinions are always different.When my opinion is different from others,I always hold my different opinion.
I think my different opinion is better.I say to them why my opinion is better.They will accept my opinion because they finally believe my opinion is better.
One day we wanted to go for an outing.We were discussing where to go for the outing.Most of my classmates wanted to go to the park.I didn't think going to the park is good.
I have a better place to go for the outing.Finally all my classmates agreed with me.We had a good time that day. [名师点评]本文总体来说符合要求但层次不高下面从两方面谈一谈所存在的问题。(1)本文出现了一定数量的重复。例如different连用了四次应该用不同的方式来表达例如可以用various来代替。(2)本文基本没有高级的表达。高级句式的应用是非常重要的哪怕是一两处也能起到画龙点睛的作用使文章有很大的提 [尝试优化] When I Have a Different Opinion
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