2. 文章不足之处在于:
①没有真正参透主题,题目是"Do We Need Space Exploration?",所以应着重强化正面观点(自己的观点),以便突出主题——到底需不需要太空探索。而作者把文章当成了对比观点的文章了,在第二段中详细论述了这两种相反的观点,导致主题不突出。
②结构虽然完整,但应把个人支持的观点独成一段,这样更能突出地针对问题加以论述。
成稿:
Man has been fascinated by outer space for thousands of years. It has been almost forty years since man’s first landing on the moon. ???? Now, some people believe that space exploration is a sheer waste of time and money. They point out the fact that it cost billions of dollars to carry on space re-search, but little information was brought back. However, every coin has two sides. There are still a number of other people who believe that space exploration has more advantages. ???? In my opinion I believe that it will bring more benefits to the people. Many new products, such as weather and communication satellites, are also products of space programs, and they have benefited people all over the world. And what’s more, scientific knowledge about outer space has been acquired by mankind.
实例指导4—On the Interne
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