1. 初稿的优点:对文章的要点把握比较准确,文章的体裁及格式准确。

　　2. 不足之处在于文章的第一段和最后一段过于简单,因此难以激起读者了解北京的兴趣。

　　3. 在第二段的要点陈述中所运用的都是简单句,句型单调不够灵活,要点转换尤显生硬。

　　成稿:

　　Have you been to China? Have you been to Beijing? There are many cultural and natural sights in Beijing. The first place that you must visit is the Great Wall —a very beautiful place. It was built 2,500 years ago. As we all know, Chairman Mao once said, "He who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man."

　　Next, let me tell you about Tian’anmen Square, the largest public square in the world. It was built as early as in 1651. Around it are halls, museums and monuments, including the Maozedong Memorial Hall, where Mao’s body rests.

　　The Summer Palace, one of the best parks in the city, is a favorite among tourists for sightseeing in Beijing. It is in the northeast part of the city. You may take a taxi or bus to get there.

　　There are also many other places to visit in Beijing. I’m sure you will enjoy them all.

　　1. 首尾呼应,画龙点睛。第一段提出了"Have you been to China? Have you been to Beijing?"的问题。而最后一段对文章概括之后,用一句"I’m sure you will enjoy them all."和第一段遥相呼应,使整篇文章给读者以浑

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